Sunday, January 29, 2017

Welcome to Writing for Publication!

Welcome to Writing for Publication!

While we won't completely leave performance, word, and text this semester we are going to focus on writing as a career. To get started, let's read what Natalie Goldberg wrote about some writing tips in her book Wild Mind.

What does it take to be a "writer"? What skills do we need? What attitude do we need to cultivate? Let's find out.
Let's read "Proofs" by Richard Rodriguez, "Senior Payroll" by William Barrett, & the poem:

From : "Afternoons" by Jorge H. Aigla

Those afternoons, the Saturdays of my tender childhood
in Mexico City
were just lovely...
I remember going to a store
that sold mountain climbing equipment:
my father knew “The Goat,”
one of the climbers of the great Popocatepetl,
and he would show us boots, ropes, and hammers,
and photographs of the Valley of Mexico and of snow.
In the old section of the city,
where they sold model airplanes
with gasoline engines,
I would watch the wealthy kids buy
and we in our dreams would fly.
Now it's our turn. Let's set the timer and bleed words and ideas on the page...

After writing, let's take a look at our first project. 

BLOG PROJECT: Setting up your very own blog

One of the most important marketing/writing skills you will need to succeed as a writer is having your own blog. Many authors have a blog where they can interact with their potential audience(s) and share the process of writing, or snippets of their personal lives.

First off, many of you are probably familiar with what a blog is, but if not, here you go--some important information:

blog is a web log or web journal. A journal written online. Just like your physical writing journal, a blog can include ideas for stories, your own personal reaction to books/films/national events, etc. It can be a good place to publish your poetry, fiction, and plays before you eventually get paid for your writing. Some companies and media sources hire writers to set up and contribute to a company blog--and they pay you for it! For more info check here.

However, there's a lot to know about blogging. Check out the links below and read a little about blogs before attempting to create one.

Here's a few sample writers blogs (with tips about being a writer)
To set up your blog:
1. Go to blogspot.com. Some students like to use WordPress.com instead. I suggest blogger because it uses your school gmail account. You may use blogger (read link to set this up), this is Google's blog site. Use your student Google email address. You may also use word press at this link. The choice is yours. 
NOTE: If you have already started a blog as a side project, or because you have already been introduced to the idea, I don't want to stop you from using it. Use your original blog site, but I will be asking that you write things specifically on your blog for our class. If this bothers you, start a new blog. No big deal.
2. You may take a quick tour to get information about the blog site you are going to use, if interested. Otherwise, create a new account.
3. Consider an appropriate title for your blog. This can be your name, but please don't use your last name. Be creative, but remember this will be a WRITER'S BLOG. You can change the name of your blog later if you need to.
NOTE: You must enter an email account (if you have no email, use one from your family; if this isn’t working, use an email account from a trusted and valued friend.) You can set up a new email account at gmail.com. This is a free service. Your email account name will be your “username”--Write your password somewhere safe where you will remember it. You will need to keep track of this.
NOTE: Please send me your blog address in the COMMENT section below.
4. Create a password, display your name, look at terms of service, etc.
5. Log onto your blog. Follow the prompts to set up your page. Write down your address/passwords, etc. (Again, I can't help you if you screw this up.)
6. You may provide biographical info and so on as prompted. At some point, you will need to create a NEW Post. Each new post needs a title and you should edit it before you post it. NOTE: You can always go back and edit a mistake on your posts if you make one.
Today, you will need to set up your Blog and write the following post(s):
A. An introduction to your website. Your first blog entry should welcome your guests and explain that you are a student @ SOTA, taking a creative writing course. This is important so that people know you are a teenager. Feel free to omit (leave out) your last name. You can also use a pseudonym if you'd prefer for privacy sake.
B. Write a short entry (non-fiction, fiction, or poetry) about something you feel passionate about. You may use the writing prompt this morning as a starting point for your work. Use what we read in class as a model. Remember. Describe your memories. Visualize the situation. Write. You can rant, rave, etc. but remember that your blog is a public forum and other people in the world can access your writing. Don't embarrass yourself. Check your spelling and language so you don't come across as ignorant or unskilled. As always, it is important for a writer to think about his/her audience.
These two blog entries will be graded as participation credit. Please complete them today. The third post (see below) is due by next class.

HOMEWORK: If you did not complete any of these parts (or did not finish writing your blog posts in class today) do so by the beginning of next class. Add entries as you see fit to your blog. Post previous poems, short stories, essays, rants, whatever you would like. Have fun and publish!

POST #3: On your newly created blog, personally respond to the linked articles/videos above. Which of the top ten writing rules makes the most sense to you? Which ones do you practice? Which ones do you need more work on? Reflect on your own writing in your blog post. Let your audience know that you take writing seriously (i.e., you think about it).

Sunday, January 22, 2017

End of Semester; Portfolio Due!

To start today, we have a speech that needs speaking. After hearing it, go to the lab and do the following:

  • Please complete your portfolio and self-reflection today in the lab. 
  • If you are missing any work for this course, please complete it now. This is your last chance.
  • Turn in journals if you didn't already do that Friday. 
If you have done all that, please do one of the following (or all) tasks:

1. Spend your time writing anything you would like to write but were never asked to. 
2. Build your vocabulary on freerice.com.
3. Play a text based game from this website
4. Watch a TedTalk.
5. Learn more grammar.
6. Study for a mid-term you have this week. 

PLEASE USE YOUR FREE TIME TO DO ONE OF THE 6 OPTIONS HERE. This is not time to TALK or distract other students. Students talking excessively or avoiding one of these many tasks will be given a penalty to lower your grade for this marking period. Period. It's like extra credit, just in reverse. 

HOMEWORK: None. We have completed semester one. Make sure you have turned in your portfolio. Expect a new seating arrangement next semester! Good luck on your midterm exams! 

Wednesday, January 18, 2017

Informational Speeches; Midterm Portfolio & Reflection

Period 3: We will complete our performances of the Informational Speech Project.

When we have completed this activity, please return next door to the lab to complete the following midterm prep.

There are two (2) parts to your midterm portfolio:
A. A 2-3 page, double-spaced, typed self evaluation essay (about 500-750 words)
B. Your 1st semester drafts of all your CW class assignments (poetry, fiction, non-fiction/speeches, and scripts only). There is no need to put homework assignments, worksheets, or projects (like powerpoint poetry or presentations) in your portfolio. You may refer to these things in your reflection. Some pieces are already in your portfolio.
Part A. Self Evaluation Essay (see details below)

Part B. Portfolio

Self Reflection Non Fiction - Creative Essay:
During your freshman year, we have thrown quite a bit of information, projects, and assignments your way. We did this so that you had the opportunity to grow as a writer and a student.

It is true that the most important qualification for writers is that they write. Apart from this, reading is also the most important way to improve your writing at this stage of your development and education. These introductory courses are designed to get you to know yourself as a student and writer a little better, and we're going to continue that trend into the second semester.

Reflective piece: 2-3 pages, double-spaced. Answer some of these questions:

  • Write about how you’ve grown as a writer so far this year by taking Ms. Gamzon or my classes. 
  • Reflect on what has been easy or hard for you. 
  • Comment on what areas you feel you need more work in; 
  • Reflect on your progress as a writer, a reader, and as a student. 
  • Discuss the work you  have done so far in our classes. 
  • What have you learned from writing these projects or drafts? 
  • Comment on the value (if any) of Performance, Word, and Text and Grammar & Style.
  • Comment on the value of keeping a writing journal. 
  • Respond to the books you have read in Creative Writing and compare those to what you have read in your English classes. 
  • Comment on your progress with grammar & writing in different genres or formats.
  • What have you learned?
Finally, give yourself at least 1 writing goal for the second semester. You may give yourself more than one goal, if you'd like. 


HOMEWORK: Your journals are due! Please turn these in to us (Ms. Gamzon & me) tomorrow, Friday, Jan. 20. If you are absent tomorrow, please make sure you turn them in by Monday at the latest--or you will not receive a grade! We will not see you, most likely, during mid-term exam week.

Monday, January 16, 2017

Rehearsal; Informational Speeches

Period 3:

Turn in homework (see previous post for details).

Please rehearse your informational speech during period 3. Work on delivering a smooth and skillful informational speech with your partner. Help each other by commenting on volume, pace, pitch of voice, enunciation & pronunciation, posture and gestures, eye contact, and energy.

Your speech will be evaluated as follows:

RUBRIC:

  • A: Speech includes a creative and clever, attention-grabbing hook, a clear and supportable thesis, good pertinent information that the audience did not know, content is creatively supported by examples that include attribution (author or source is stated clearly in the speech), performance was well rehearsed, speakers fluidly deliver the speech, eye-contact and performance skills enhance the experience, works cited page is completed, correctly formatted and useful.
  • B: Speech includes a clear thesis. The information in the speech is useful or relevant to the audience. Speech is supported by examples. Performance is adequate for 9th grade students, some minor fluidity issues or interruptions, but overall well delivered, minor eye-contact, performance was adequate, works cited page is mostly correct, but may have a minor error or two.
  • C: Speech suggests a thesis. The information in the speech is adequate. Speech may be too short (fewer than 2 minutes) or too long (longer than 7 minutes). Performance is attempted, but needs more rehearsal. Awkward delivery, but the attempt was made. No eye-contact or easily disrupted by the audience, works cited page is somewhat correct, but may not follow MLA format (or there are more than a few errors)
  • D: Speech delivered, but clearly shows lack of energy, effort, or practice. Work may be too short or long. Speech as "c" grade above, but works cited page is missing or incomplete or not formatted correctly in MLA format.
  • F: No speech was delivered.
Period 4: Performances of your information speeches (in room 238). Please make sure you have turned in a copy of your speech (with your partner's name on the draft) and include an MLA formatted works cited page.  

HOMEWORK: None.

Wednesday, January 11, 2017

Informational Speech Draft Due!

Today, please complete your draft for your informational speech. By the end of class today, you and your partner should have your speech completely written, rewritten, revised, and ready to go.

If you finish your draft with time remaining in class, please use this time in the lab to print out copies for you and your partner. Then practice your speech. Read your speech out loud again and again. Catch and correct any errors you may have missed. If you make corrections, please hand in the corrected version of the speech to me by the end of class for grading.

Your MLA formatted works cited page is also due today. Please turn in both your completed speech draft (give your draft a title) with you and your partner's names, as well as, your correctly formatted works cited page for at least 3 (or more) resources you used.

HOMEWORK/CLASSWORK: If you finish or stop rehearsing before the end of class, please watch a model of how speakers effectively deliver information in speeches. Choose at least 1 speech, and, to turn in next class, 1.) summarize the main points of the speech, and 2.) evaluate how the speaker used their body, voice, visual aides or technology, and performance skills to give an effective speech.


You may watch and summarize/evaluate more than one talk for extra credit. The more you watch and learn and evaluate, the more extra credit.

We will rehearse and deliver our group inspirational speeches next class (after Martin Luther King Jr. Day)!

Tuesday, January 10, 2017

The Informational Speech Group Project: Day 2

The Informational Speech Group Project

From last class you should have:
brainstormed in your journal a list of topics that you'd like to learn more about or topics that interest you. (we did this together in class!)
After brainstorming we found another person in the room who had at least ONE of the same topics written in their journal as you did.  
From the lists you and your partner generated, choose one subject with your partner. This is your speech topic. You do not have to choose the topic that you originally shared with your partner!
You may have begun to research. Once you decided on a speech topic with your partner, you will spend some time finding out the following:
  • A. what is it? 
  • B. where does it come from or what is its history/culture? (or what are its component parts?) 
  • C. why is it important? (to you, to us, to the country, to the world, etc.)
  • D. How does it affect us or how is this topic relevant to our lives? (why should your audience care to learn about this topic?)
SUPER IMPORTANT: An effective informational speech deals with information that your audience DOES NOT KNOW already. This information should be RELEVANT or IMPORTANT or CONNECT to your audience's life. 

It is sometimes necessary to narrow or broaden your topic. If you are too broad, your audience may misunderstand what your point is (or if your information is too general, your audience will likely already know some or all of it--and therefore will be bored). If you are too narrow, you may alienate or frustrate or bore your audience, as what you are speaking about has no relevance or importance to the audience. Strike a happy medium.  

RESEARCH: 

Writers do a lot of research. This skill is necessary for you to be successful in this artistic field. Let's practice. Use the questions above to help guide your research. Keep track of the information or resources you read. You will need this information for your works cited page.

When you find your answers, make sure you cite the website, author, speaker, or writer of your source. This is called gathering sources. You will need at least 3 sources that you write up on a works cited page to turn in when you deliver your speech.

You should work with your partner and divide tasks. Try breaking down a topic into parts that make up the whole. Or give each group member a question to answer (what is it, for example? or why is it important?) You do not have to sit next to each other to research. Before the end of class come back together with your partnership and discuss further action that must be taken.

By the end of THIS class, you should have completed the following:
1. Researched a topic (gathered at least 1-3 sources)
2. Write your speech together. Break your speech down into 2, 4, or 6 parts. You and your partner will be required to share the responsibility of speaking to the class during your section of the speech. Use an outline to identify what parts you will have to cover in your informational speech. 
NOTE: You may find if you write a paragraph containing each new idea or point (or writing a paragraph for each question posed in detail) you will have enough speech to fill 3-7 minutes. 
3. Support your speech by being specific. Use facts and quotes and stories (anecdotes) to illustrate or describe your main ideas or opinions. Use the research you conducted and embed it into your text. This is attributing your sources. If you borrow information from another writer, a website, or article you must give that person or thing credit.
4. Create an MLA works cited page for your speech. Your MLA formatted works cited page will be due when you deliver your speech (probably next week some time). See handout to help you. 
FAQs:
Q: How much time do I have to present?
A: Please keep your presentations between 3-7 minutes. As long as you've explained what it is and why it's important, we get the idea. Realize that very, very short presentations may not be thorough enough. I want to see high school grade work. Any project that goes beyond 7 minutes will be cut off and given a penalty to its grade. Any presentation that is not at least 3 minutes in length will receive the same penalty. Use your phones to time yourself when you practice. If the speech is too short, you will have to add to it. If the speech is too long, you will have to cut some of it. 
Q: When is this project due? 
A: We will most likely deliver the speeches next week. 
Q: How am I going to be graded?
A: Your presentation will be graded on how informative the project is, what it communicates, how prepared you are in presenting the speech, your physical presentation with attention to volume, pacing, enunciation, energy, effort, & eye contact, and how well done the research and writing was. Remember that along with the presentation (the speech), you are required to turn in a works-cited page (in MLA format)

Q: So what is research? Isn't that just copying someone else's work and passing it off as mine?
A: No. Please record any sources that you use for your presentation/project. Write down website addresses and authors of these sources to include them in your works cited page. In your speech or during your presentation, it is important for you to cite the sources you use. If you borrowed an idea from someone, give them credit for it. For example: According to..., or _____ writes/states...., or In a comment posted by..., or writer/critic/author/artist/musician/reporter/etc. suggests/writes/states/mentions/posits/argues/believes, etc.
ANY REFERENCE TO SPECIFIC KNOWLEDGE/LANGUAGE THAT IS NOT COMMON KNOWLEDGE MUST BE CITED OR GIVEN CREDIT.

How do I set up a works cited page for MLA Format: (see left hand side of the webpage for specific details depending on the source you are using...!)
 If you have further questions, please ask.

HOMEWORK: Complete your informational speech draft if you did not complete it in class.

Thursday, January 5, 2017

Inspirational Speeches; The Informational Speech Project

Inspirational speeches: Day 2

We will conclude our inspirational speeches in room 238. After all students complete their presentation/speech, we will retire to the lab to begin the following:

The Informational Speech Group Project

For our next project we are going to deliver a short informational group speech to the class. Please follow each of the following steps CAREFULLY. READ this post first, before asking me about what we're doing:

1.Take no more than 2 minutes to brainstorm in your journal a list of topics that you'd like to learn more about or topics that interest you. (Let's do this in class!)
2. After brainstorming you will be given a few minutes to stand and move about the room. Please do not stay seated! Find another person in the room who has at least ONE of the same topics written in their journal as you did. Once you find this person, go next door and sit down with your partner. Chat a bit about the rest of this blog post. Read the post together so that you both understand what you need to accomplish by the end of the project. Ask Mr. Craddock about anything that remains unclear. 
3. From the lists you generated, choose one subject with your partner. This will be your speech topic. You do not have to choose the topic that you originally shared with your partner!
4. Once you have decided together on a speech topic with your partner, spend some time today finding out the following:
  • A. what is it? 
  • B. where does it come from or what is its history/culture? (or what are its component parts?) 
  • C. why is it important? (to you, to us, to the country, to the world, etc.)
  • D. How does it affect us or how is this topic relevant to our lives? (why should your audience care to learn about this topic?)

Use the web to search for answers to those four questions.

When you find your answers, make sure you cite the website, author, speaker, or writer of your source. This is called gathering sources. You will need at least 3 sources that you write up on a works cited page to turn in when you deliver your speech.

You should work with your partner and divide tasks. Try breaking down a topic into parts that make up the whole. Or give each group member a question to answer (what is it, for example? or why is it important?) You do not have to sit next to each other to research. Before the end of class come back together with your partnership and discuss further action that must be taken.

By the end of THIS class, you should have completed the following:
1. Researched a topic (gathered at least 1-3 sources)
2. Begun writing your speech together. Break your speech down into 2, 4, or 6 parts. You and your partner will be required to share the responsibility of speaking to the class during your section of the speech. 
NOTE: You may find if you write a paragraph containing each new idea or point (or writing a paragraph for each question posed in detail) you will have enough speech to fill 3-7 minutes. Don't forget to use the tool of outlining to help you organize your ideas! 
3. Support your speech by being specific. Use facts and quotes and stories (anecdotes) to illustrate or describe your main ideas or opinions. Use the research you conducted and embed it into your text. This is attributing your sources. If you borrow information from another writer, a website, or article you must give that person or thing credit.
4. Create an MLA works cited page for your speech. Your MLA formatted works cited page will be due when you deliver your speech (probably next week some time). 
Next class we will complete the writing of your speech and also begin to prepare our speeches for delivery to the class. More information about how to do that is coming up.
Q: How much time do I have to present?
A: Please keep your presentations between 3-7 minutes. As long as you've explained what it is and why it's important, we get the idea. Realize that very, very short presentations may not be thorough enough. I want to see high school grade work. Any project that goes beyond 7 minutes will be cut off and given a penalty to its grade. Any presentation that is not at least 3 minutes in length will receive the same penalty. Use your phones to time yourself when you practice. If the speech is too short, you will have to add to it. If the speech is too long, you will have to cut some of it. 
Q: When is this project due? 
A: We will most likely deliver the speeches next week. 
Q: How am I going to be graded?
A: Your presentation will be graded on how informative the project is, what it communicates, how prepared you are in presenting the speech, your physical presentation with attention to volume, pacing, ennunciation, energy, effort, & eye contact, and how well done the research and writing was. Remember that along with the presentation (the speech), you are required to turn in a works-cited page (in MLA format)

Q: So what is research? Isn't that just copying someone else's work and passing it off as mine?
A: No. Please record any sources that you use for your presentation/project. Write down website addresses and authors of these sources to include them in your works cited page. In your speech or during your presentation, it is important for you to cite the sources you use. If you borrowed an idea from someone, give them credit for it. For example: According to..., or _____ writes/states...., or In a comment posted by..., or writer/critic/author/artist/musician/reporter/etc. suggests/writes/states/mentions/posits/argues/believes, etc.
ANY REFERENCE TO SPECIFIC KNOWLEDGE/LANGUAGE THAT IS NOT COMMON KNOWLEDGE MUST BE CITED OR GIVEN CREDIT.

How do I set up a works cited page for MLA Format: (see left hand side of the webpage for specific details depending on the source you are using...!)
 If you have further questions, please ask.

HOMEWORK: None.

Tuesday, January 3, 2017

Inspirational Speeches

Period 3: Please take 5 minutes to watch the following video and take a look at the criteria for your presentation today:
REMEMBER: Effective performance is based on a few things:
  • 1. Preparation (rehearsal) -- knowing what you are saying and why.
  • 2. Voice (how you sound: volume, pacing, pitch, tone, elocution, and appropriateness of voice)
  • 3. Character (how you portray a character both vocally and physically)
  • 4. Energy
  • 5. Making choices. A good performer makes deliberate choices about voice, character, energy, tone, and rehearses these choices to deliver a solid performance.
Please get into the following small groups to practice performing/reading your inspirational speeches:

Group Q: Kordae, Victoria, Kemani
Group X: Jenna, Isobel, Akhiyar
Group Y: Jesziah, Ja'Miah, Javant, Pahz
Group Z: Raeona, Britney, Joshua, Turon

If your name is not listed above, it is because you did not turn in a speech draft when it was due. Instead of practicing, please complete your work alone and practice the inspirational speech when you have finished. Please don't bother other groups who did the work they were supposed to have completed!

End of Period 3; Period 4: We will go to the Ensemble Theater and listen to your inspirational speeches.

HOMEWORK: None.

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