Let's start off class today reading some poems to inspire us to write our own poetry.
Literally, or denotatively, a poem is a piece of writing, often having figurative language and lines, that suggest rhythm and a visual image. We use figurative language when our writing goes beyond the "actual meanings of words (denotation) so that the reader gains new insights into the objects or subjects" in our draft.
Literally, or denotatively, a poem is a piece of writing, often having figurative language and lines, that suggest rhythm and a visual image. We use figurative language when our writing goes beyond the "actual meanings of words (denotation) so that the reader gains new insights into the objects or subjects" in our draft.
Poems should utilize imagery (an appeal to the senses by using a metaphor, simile, assonance/consonance, alliteration, symbol, personification, onomatopoeia, specific nouns/active verbs, figurative language); poems do not need to rhyme. They should create a specific picture or image in the mind of the reader or listener. Usually, there is a turning point or volta near the end of the poem (or the last line)--usually to surprise the reader.
All poem drafts should have a meaning, a theme. There are 4 themes found in poems (sometimes more than one of these 4 themes is found in a single poem!)
Poems are always about:
- Human life
- Death
- Nature
- Love
POEM TASK #2: In your journal make a list of subject matter that you might write a poem about. Get a good list going. Then select one of your ideas and turn it into a poem draft. Take 5-10 minutes to complete your draft. Try to write relatively quickly, but focus on a single IMAGE or impression or emotion you are trying to describe. Consider the 4 different themes. For PART 2 of the draft, rewrite the same poem, but focus on one of the different themes. Consider how this changes a poem.
Poems should have a structure. They look different sitting on a page. They are not written like prose is written. They are special. However, they should be written using punctuation. Paragraphs in poems are called stanzas. When we change the topic or scene, we can start a new stanza.
Poems are written using line breaks. Line breaks are important--because they mean something in a poem. A long line slows the pace of your poem. A short line speeds up the pace of your poem.
Structure: Dice poem exercise... Get ready to write. Follow these rules:
- Select a subject from your journal list. Or, since you're going to use dice, choose one of these themes: chance or fate, gambling, randomness, something unpredictable, games, probability, etc.
- Select 2 dice from the pile.
- Roll both dice to determine the # of lines for your poem.
- As you write each line, roll both dice to determine the number of words in each line of the poem.
- Write that poem in your journal for participation credit.
Take 10 minutes to do this. If you like your drafts from your journal, type up your work and print the file next door. Turn it in to me to read and I'll place the draft in your writing portfolio.
If you finish early, watch this video about advice writing poetry and jot down advice you want to remember in your journal (this is participation credit for your journal--and you may learn something!) Please use headphones, if you have them:
Poem starters - Write a poem about:
HOMEWORK: Write poems. no homework. By now, you should have several pages written in your journal. If you did not complete these assignments, please do so for homework and turn them in late. [Late penalty applies]. Feel free to continue to write in your journal. Each page you write gains you more credit.
If you finish early, watch this video about advice writing poetry and jot down advice you want to remember in your journal (this is participation credit for your journal--and you may learn something!) Please use headphones, if you have them:
- What Makes a Poem (5 min.)
Poem starters - Write a poem about:
- No one knows about... (use this opening line to write a poem that involves something or several things that someone doesn't know about you--or the speaker/narrator of the poem...)
- Three wishes (perhaps one wish per stanza; what would you wish for and why? Past wishes, wishes that came true, etc.)
- Traveling to a special place or writing about going to a special place you visited when you were younger or in trouble, etc.
- Getting a haircut or writing about your first haircut experience; write about your first operation or visit to the hospital, etc.
- A scientific fact (real or invented) that fascinates you [Use scientific vocabulary to describe ordinary human activities, etc.]
- An insect that got into your home or an insect that you studied or observed in a particular place/time
- The sound of a specific language (a time you heard a new word or a different language)
- Death (the time you first became aware of death or mortality or loss)
- The number 3 (or your favorite #)
- The ocean (recall your first visit there, or use the ocean as a symbol for conflict in a human life)
- Missing someone
- Something that makes you angry
- The ups and downs of love
- The view out of your window or your backyard or a room in your house
- City lights at night (lights in the morning or during a quiet rainstorm or snowfall)
- A particular work of art (ekphrastic poetry—find a picture and describe it or how you feel viewing it)
- Having a superpower (If I could…; or I’ll be…, etc.)
- Being in an airplane or on a train or on horseback or a bike (flying or riding for the first time)
- Playing a sport
- A shadow
- A person transformed into an animal or object (You are a…; describe a person as an animal or object, etc.)
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